our recounts

 We have been writing recounts of things we did at the weekend, and we have been practising using a different word to start each sentence.

In the weekend I was no my Xbox I played my Minecraft. Then I went to Ta'aseu's world.
by Tamiano.
First I woke up and I went out  of my bedroom. I went in to my room
by Jeremiah.
We  lined  up  on  the  yellow  line.  Then we  did   exercises.
by  Daniela.

Our stories composed using different sentence starters.

For our writing this week we are learning to use different words to stat our sentences. This is to make our writing and stories more interesting to the reader. 




At playtime I played on the slide. But I was happy on the slide with my friends and we all had fun at school. Then we ate our sandwiches at lunch  time and milk.  They all wanted me and  I did go to them. then we played on the slide together. I had lots of fun on the swings with my friends too.

 Then we  went so  me where else. Then the bell rang and we went in class , we ran really fast.
At playtime I played hide and seek. I played tag with my friend. We played up in the tree.

When I was making the rakau I always had to roll it. We put sellotape on the rakau to make it tight. We covered the rakau in white paper. I tried to make it.