Scary Halloween Stories

Once upon a time at my home there was a monster at night. He broke my home. He said "Sorry" and fixed my home. And they lived happily ever after.
By Vainetutai

Once upon a time zombies were at a haunted house at night. The zombie was lost at night time. Then the zombie caught up to the car and the zombie said "Please can I have a lift?" The driver said "Yes" and the zombie went back home. And they lived happily ever after.
by Jeremiah 

Once upon a time there was a zombie. Then Mum was scared very scared. She ran away so fast. The witch came and she helped Mum. And they lived happily ever after. By Nazim

Once upon a time  last week on Friday, there was classroom that had a mum a dad and sister visiting. There was a fire and mum dad and the sister ran out of the classroom. Then the fire burn't down the whole classroom and the classroom fell apart.Then somebody got hit by a car. After that mum woke up and she said " Goodness, it was a dream." Then some workers came with there tools to build a brand new classroom. And they all lived ever after.

Iviongo.

Once upon a time at KFC and Pizza Hut there was the smallest line ever in KFC. But the longest line in Pizza Hut. At the boy's rugby game the boy got the 'Best Star Player'  and he went to KFC, but the line was too long. Then he saw Pizza Hut line was short so he went there. The 'Star Team' was his team, because they went to Pizza Hut. And they all lived happily ever after.

Jeremiah.

Once upon a time at KFC mum and Angel waited for ever to get in line first. Mum and Angel could not walk because there was a storm. That night the moon turned red.The next day Mum woke up and said "Where am I ? she  was at home. "It was just a dream" she said. And they all lived happily ever after.
Hazel.

WALT write stories
Where                                                               What                                                      How  
City Market                                                   Earthquake                                   They found Hazel         Hazel and her family                                     Hazel got lost                            hiding under the stall
and everyone at the market                                                                                                              


Once upon a time Hazel and her family went to the city Market. To buy some oranges, carrots, potatoes, grapes and porridge.  CRASH the cars and the windows and the cupboards broke. There was an earthquake in the city market. Hazel ran under the table and hid there, and she left her sister. She was lost in all the dust.
 Her family couldn't see her because of the dust. All the family split up and started to look for her. Her family yelled for Hazel, and Hazel heard them. Hazel found her Mum.
 
WALT write recounts

My best day

My best day in the holidays was when two of us went to the movies, we saw Teenage Ninja Turtles. We had fun at the movies  we both had popcorn, One of us saw a friend from our class, I waved to her, and talked to her. and coke , one of us had ice cream. We played games on our PS3 and X box 360. 

Zoofari

 We went to the Zoo. The chimpanzees can climb. I like the chimpanzees because they are good catchers. I like them because they have strong muscles to climb.The pelicans paddle on the water. I like  the way the kangaroos are relaxing on the grass.

our recounts

 We have been writing recounts of things we did at the weekend, and we have been practising using a different word to start each sentence.

In the weekend I was no my Xbox I played my Minecraft. Then I went to Ta'aseu's world.
by Tamiano.
First I woke up and I went out  of my bedroom. I went in to my room
by Jeremiah.
We  lined  up  on  the  yellow  line.  Then we  did   exercises.
by  Daniela.

Our stories composed using different sentence starters.

For our writing this week we are learning to use different words to stat our sentences. This is to make our writing and stories more interesting to the reader. 




At playtime I played on the slide. But I was happy on the slide with my friends and we all had fun at school. Then we ate our sandwiches at lunch  time and milk.  They all wanted me and  I did go to them. then we played on the slide together. I had lots of fun on the swings with my friends too.

 Then we  went so  me where else. Then the bell rang and we went in class , we ran really fast.
At playtime I played hide and seek. I played tag with my friend. We played up in the tree.

When I was making the rakau I always had to roll it. We put sellotape on the rakau to make it tight. We covered the rakau in white paper. I tried to make it. 

WALT describe 2 objects to compare them, and contrast them.

On the trip we found a long wiggly leaf  and a big smooth rock.
Both objects came from outside.
The rock is triangular, and the leaf is irregular.
The rock is heavier than the leaf.
 I like the rock because it is hard and I like the leaf because it is pointy.