Once upon a time  last week on Friday, there was classroom that had a mum a dad and sister visiting. There was a fire and mum dad and the sister ran out of the classroom. Then the fire burn't down the whole classroom and the classroom fell apart.Then somebody got hit by a car. After that mum woke up and she said " Goodness, it was a dream." Then some workers came with there tools to build a brand new classroom. And they all lived ever after.

Iviongo.

Once upon a time at KFC and Pizza Hut there was the smallest line ever in KFC. But the longest line in Pizza Hut. At the boy's rugby game the boy got the 'Best Star Player'  and he went to KFC, but the line was too long. Then he saw Pizza Hut line was short so he went there. The 'Star Team' was his team, because they went to Pizza Hut. And they all lived happily ever after.

Jeremiah.

Once upon a time at KFC mum and Angel waited for ever to get in line first. Mum and Angel could not walk because there was a storm. That night the moon turned red.The next day Mum woke up and said "Where am I ? she  was at home. "It was just a dream" she said. And they all lived happily ever after.
Hazel.